Thursday, 17 December 2015
Friday, 11 December 2015
Feedback - 11 Dec
Tia,
Some good work to date and you are progressing well through the work. Your magazine is taking shape and there is a clear use of conventions being integrated. Well done. Some points for your blog posts to date:
1 - Your mood boards must have a short analysis to accompany them. It doesn't need to be extensive but it should relate to the target audience and how it would appeal/reflect them. Each one of your mood boards needs an analysis.
2 - Your colour mood board is still missing.
3 - You still have 3 analysis pieces missing - 1 DPS, 1 contents page and 1 front cover. You may well have completed the work but it must be uploaded to your blog ASAP.
I have left you some comments on various posts which you should address to improve your work. Improving these and filling in the gaps on your blog is going to be your Xmas work. Make sure you get on top of this and don't leave it all until the last minute. Check your tick list if necessary to double check that you have everything on your blog.
Carl.
Some good work to date and you are progressing well through the work. Your magazine is taking shape and there is a clear use of conventions being integrated. Well done. Some points for your blog posts to date:
1 - Your mood boards must have a short analysis to accompany them. It doesn't need to be extensive but it should relate to the target audience and how it would appeal/reflect them. Each one of your mood boards needs an analysis.
2 - Your colour mood board is still missing.
3 - You still have 3 analysis pieces missing - 1 DPS, 1 contents page and 1 front cover. You may well have completed the work but it must be uploaded to your blog ASAP.
I have left you some comments on various posts which you should address to improve your work. Improving these and filling in the gaps on your blog is going to be your Xmas work. Make sure you get on top of this and don't leave it all until the last minute. Check your tick list if necessary to double check that you have everything on your blog.
Carl.
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